You Instead (3 stars)

You Instead

Poor dialogue lets down an otherwise whimsical love story

(15) 80min

This breathless mismatched love story, filmed entirely over two days at T in the Park 2010, is the first of two new Scottish films from David Mackenzie (Young Adam, Hallam Foe), the second being next month’s Glasgow-set sci-fi Perfect Sense. With You Instead Mackenzie attempts a contemporary spin on a classic plot - two characters at loggerheads thrown together and slowly falling in love – but while it’s not without scruffy charms, the film’s rough edges are its undoing.

Debut screenwriter Thomas Leveritt’s plot contrivances are jarring and forced, a fact only made more obvious by the real and very recognisable setting. As the rival rock stars accidentally handcuffed together, Luke Treadaway and Natalia Tena have an infectious spark, but Leveritt’s awful dialogue lets them down at every turn. Most damagingly, there is a lot of talk about the power of music, but few demonstrations of it.

That is a shame, as the film is dotted with moments of inspiration where Mackenzie’s admirable ambition pays off. A central montage, backed by a stunning live performance from Scottish singer Jo Mango, brings a much-needed sense of focus to the story, and the opening single-take song sequence sets a wonderfully whimsical tone.

Selected release from Fri 16 Sep.

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You Instead

  • 3 stars
  • 2011
  • UK
  • 15
  • Directed by: David MacKenzie
  • Written by: Thomas Leveritt
  • Cast: Luke Treadaway, Natalia Tena, Sophie Wu, Mathew Baynton, Gavin Mitchell, Alastair MacKenzie, Ruta Gedmintas, Kari Corbett

A breathless story of mismatched love, as two rival rock stars are accidentally handcuffed together at T in the Park festival (where the whole thing was filmed onsite over two days at the 2010 edition). Moments of inspiration and a certain scruffy charm are marred by awful dialogue and jarring plot contrivances.

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